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[Jazz1342]

it was a rainy day and from aroind the corner two glowing yellow eyes peered out at me.....

[Rabenmond]

Hi, I hope you like my text
Please correct me if something doesn´t fit, I´m not that good at English.


It hadn´t even been 20 minutes since I had called Joe and yet my hands felt completely numb when I heard his steps behind me.
The wind carried a soft hiss towards me and the eyes vanished as if blown out, as Joe´s shadow fell before my feet.
“How long since you noticed?” he didn´t whisper and yet the deep sound of his voice was hardly louder than the cold wind swirling about us.
“I called you almost immediately”
“Just beyond that corner?” I nodded.
“What do you think it was, Tal?”
“Not sure. Yellow eyes, not unlike cat´s, but bigger. No face, just shadow around them. Shadows seemed like ashes though, grey and somehow pale”
“Sounds a bit like Liscrow”

Liscrows were like will-o´-the-wisps, or seemed to be, because of their dim eyes which ever changed from high pitched green to dark rotten yellow. They had no constant body, sitting in fireplaces, luring people towards them to burn them with still hot ashes.
“Too easy” I breathed. “The eyes were of fast yellow”
“Nothing else, just the eyes?”
“You heard the hiss?”
He didn´t answer, which meant “no”.
“Sounded like a flame going out by the touch of water”
“Ashes”, he mumbled. Then “You called Tarrow?”
“Short ring, he knows where we are”
“OK, let´s go”. I stood up from the doorstep.
He went to the corner and I followed him.

“Talon” It was just a split second silence. That kind of Joe´s silence, that held all words necessary, as we looked together into total blackness where should have been a normal grey street.
I could have felt it, even without Joe telling me. It was the emptiness in the air, the cold wind that had suddenly ceased.
This hunt would be different, though I did not yet know that it would change nearly everything.
Then we stepped into the darkness beyond the corner and vanished, just like the bright yellow eyes had done before.

[Clayton]

"Falling...am I dreaming; No, Joe is still here; falling forever." My foot finally hits the ground (like a stomp) Joe looks over to me. "why is everything turning black; why am I falling." Joe grabs me and pulls me to my feet and gives me a well deserved slap to the face. "Mike; what's going on with you." Mike looks to Joe and says, "it was like I was stuck in a time vortex" Joe laughs and pushes Mike further into the darkness. "There is no reason to be scared now." A high pitched scream was heard; suddenly yellow eyes appear all around them; followed by shiny razor sharp silver teeth. The creatures of the night soon surrounded them; suddenly a bright light appeared above them. The creatures stared at the two men, while slowly fading away into the night. In the helicopter hovering above a voice from a loud speaker said, "what are you two doing down there get back inside your houses, now!" (the helicopter flies off into the distance)